The vision on Navad where Ferdosipour is questioning the person is just awesome.
The guy said it is perfectly fine and that a "kar shenas" wrote it. He wouldnt accept the faults that Adel was pointing out. GOLD!!!!
Just a question though......How is it that the President of NADO is now someone who is 'running our country'????
this comes back to farting on the other side of the world and saying it was a Mullahs fault yeah?
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LOL @ the guy who says there's nothing wrong with it! Here's a list of the mistakes, just in the 1st sentence!!!
1 - "Follow to" should be "Following", "Further to", or "Pursuant to"
2 - "correspondence on" should be "correspondence of" (on implies there was a reply)
3 - Date format is incorrect: Should be "20th of [no comma] September [no abbreviation] 2014" or "September 20th, 2014"
4 - There should be no semi-colon after "2014"
5 - "Reflect" is the incorrect verb here - providing, including, or containing are some possibilities
6 - There should be "a/the" before "DCF"
7 - There should be "a/the" before "positive sample"
8 - There should be no space before the comma, but space after the comma
9 - "ing" missing after pertain.
10 - "Tractor Club" should not be in quotations and is also the wrong name for the club, it's Tractor F.C.
11 - Tractor FC is not a Tehran club!!!
12 - "Participated in" should be "a participant in" or should be preceded by "which" and no parentheses
13 - Name of the league is incorrect!!!
14 - There should be no semi-colon before "this is", rather a comma
15 - The comma after you should be replaced with "that"
16 - "Based upon" should be replaced by "further/pursuant to"
17 - There is no article 15-3-1 in the WADA code!!!
18 - There should be "the" before WADA
19 - There should be a period after code, end of sentence.
Since there is no article 15-3-1 in the WADA code, I don't even know what he's trying to say there, so let's just assume that should be a new sentence which itself contains almost half a dozen errors!!!
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Originally posted by Team Melli Fan View PostVideo from Navad of Adel putting the idiotic head of IFF in his place for writing this retarded letter to FIFA for the doping appeal:
https://www.facebook.com/video.php?v=807637959307028
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