[Rahman Ahmadi] Team Melli Sketches [Rahman Ahmadi]

**ehsan singapore** · 02-26-2009, 01:42 AM

NOT funny

**Arian** · 02-26-2009, 01:46 AM

good job man

you guys are so mean

**DubFreeek** · 02-26-2009, 01:57 AM

Nice job on drawing, mabe if we give u an idea of a joke u can can make it, here is one

Daei to Houman Afazeli: Poshte dare office-am KILIIDEH??
Houman Afazeli to Daei: Khob maloomeh poshte dare kilideh!!
Daei to Houman Afazeli: Na baba, manzooram poshte dare office-am KI LIIDE??

(you know Daei pronounces all the R as L)

**Arian** · 02-26-2009, 01:58 AM

Originally Posted by DeepDish

Nice job on drawing, mabe if we give u an idea of a joke u can can make it, here is one
Daei to Houman Afazeli: Poshte dare office-am KILIIDEH??
Houman Afazeli to Daei: Khob maloomeh poshte dare kilideh!!
Daei to Houman Afazeli: Na baba, man ***** poshte dare office-am KI LIIDE??
(you know Daei prnouces all the R as L)

lame funny

**Omids** · 02-26-2009, 02:45 AM

good drawings erdi jan. keep at it and dont let the meanies discourage u.

Deepdish, i found ur interaction between daie and Afezeli quite funny

**erdi77** · 02-26-2009, 07:24 AM

Thanks for the members who gave me a positive response to my work. At least some recognized there was plenty of work behind it.

Originally Posted by DeepDish

Daei to Houman Afazeli: Poshte dare office-am KILIIDEH??
Houman Afazeli to Daei: Khob maloomeh poshte dare kilideh!!
Daei to Houman Afazeli: Na baba, manzooram poshte dare office-am KI LIIDE??

Thanks for your idea, Dadash. Unfortunately I don't speak more than about 20 words of Farsi so I am not able to understand it. But I will try another cartoon I already had in mind as I told in my first post and this time I'm gonna make the joke more obvisious as some people have problems to understand the last one.
If you will still don't like the next, I'll give it up and don't waste my free time anymore.

**Kiafan06** · 02-26-2009, 08:05 AM

Originally Posted by erdi77

Guys,

I did not touch your sense of humour, ok, that is fair enough. But do you really have to call my work "shit" and tell me that a "monkey could do better"??
Why do you think I spend my free time creating this work?? Because I wanted to make you guys a pleasure. I wanted to bring you some happiness with my work. It did not worked out. But do you really have to tell me things as I only wanted to please you?? Can't you at least show a litte bit respect to my work??

Thanks anyway to the few members who had some nice words for me.

Personally, I think it's real good, and it WAS kind of funny.
I really enjoyed it and hope you make this a regular thing. I would love to see more.
It's sad to see that people shot you down the very first time you did something like this.
Personally, I don't see why people have to be so rude on here. They COULD have just not posted anything if they didn't like it.
In my opinion, very creative and funny post, maybe a little bit funnier next time. repped.

**kurosh** · 02-26-2009, 12:34 PM

great skills, keep up the good work

**DubFreeek** · 02-26-2009, 01:10 PM

Erdi ... Now honestly speaking, I think u got talent there, dont give up, even if the joke is not funny, the cartoon is very good, many people can come up with jokes but few people can draw nice cartoons. So I advise you to continue posting and trying, keep all of them in this thread (no need to open new threads) and I bet ur jokes will also improve to be as good as ur drawing