[Rahman Ahmadi] Team Melli Sketches [Rahman Ahmadi]

[CHaMiLLionaire]

agha erdi..heres an idea for ur next one...try and make fun of TM's color changing jersey....and those colorful training kits..lol

[erdi77]

agha erdi..heres an idea for ur next one...try and make fun of TM's color changing jersey....and those colorful training kits..lol

Good idea, dadash. I had the same some days ago.

I also wanted to do a comic in which Zandi uses wrong Farsi and one in which Hosseini and Aghili start arguing in a very childish way.

It's good if you give me ideas for comics. Especially the people who don't think that my comics are funny so they can show how great their humour is.
Please, if you have ideas for dialogues, tell them in English as I am unfortunately not able to speak more than twenty words of Farsi.

[david]

heres an idea, find another hobby

[Adnan]

khaste nabashi, dadash.

a better story and no one would dare to show you disrespect.

[nazari]

ERDI .. nice job .. very talented, indeed.

Please don't pay attention to people discouraging and belittling themselves. Most probably, they lack any talent, so their stupid comments are out of lack of self-confidence. Keep up the good job and the humour part will come by time (completely agree with dubfreek)

No, this is not "ta'rof" or being polite, THIS IS CALLED ENCOURAGEMENT, which has no place in our culture, unfortunately.

[Ghormeh Sabzi]

okay second one was slightly funnier at least i get it.. i'm sorry erdi jan but the first one was like **zirp zirp** or **cricket cricket** lol


and some of you guys talk like if you can draw and can do better... let see your work and see wat you got. talking is cheap

[Ghomarbaaz]

cheghad khandidam! NOT!!!!!!!!!!!

[faraz]

erdi jan,

ignore haters. you have to start somewhere right? although it is not my type of humour, i think you're drawings are perfect for cartoons. work on the dialogue more and don't rush things.

overall B grade.

good job, and keep them coming! don't let the crowd get you down.

[Paradigm]

Here is a Team Melli Cartoon I made.
Another cartoon will follow soon.
Ali Daei & Mehrzad Madanchi (Unfortunately I screwed up Madanchi, I thought he would be easier to draw)

Nice drawings, the words and context need to improve. I think Daie picking on Khatibi for failing to score goals would be funnier.

[Batigol]

the second one i though it was Hejazi and not Rudmuller in the first LOOK but they look great nice work.

hey guys he did not said TM joke But TM cartoon so it doesn`t have to be funny. it is cartoon