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    The story of Branko Ivankovic in Iran

    Part One
    http://www.irangoals.com/site/fullst...3814131567.php

    Part Two
    http://www.irangoals.com/site/fullst...2268593613.php

    There are probably a lot grammar errors in my article. If you find one please post it and I will correct it.
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    First sentence should be It's, not its. It's=it is. Its=possessive.

    There are more, but if you want me to correct it, send me the draft and I'll go over it meticulously in the next few days.
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